Use this section to tell the long form version of your story. Talk about your background, where you grew up, your hobbies/interests. Give the reader a really Clear idea of who you are because this will give them something to find in common with you.

In addition to talking about your background, talk about your journey. What cause you to start, where are you now on your journey, what have you experienced so far and what do you hope to achieve. Again, you're looking to give the reader something they can find in common with you. If they find something in common with you, they will latch on and follow you.

What about one to two paragraphs up here, and the rest of the story down below.